Posted by jessika k on March 20, 1999 at 03:24:59:
In Reply to: A Soul's Serenade posted by Benji Radtke on March 19, 1999 at 15:00:47:
wow. i never thought 2 lines of poetry could be so good and hard hitting. i can feel exactly what you feel.
the choice of words is careful and wonderful. i wouldn't change a thing in this poem. maybe, i would try to write more of the same feel, but at the same time, that might ruin the simplicity of the 2 lines. (even the title sums it all up perfectly)
i love your style, it seems oddly similar to mine at times.
jessika k
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