Posted by jessika k on March 20, 1999 at 03:13:31:
In Reply to: pale blue glasses posted by sarah hanson on March 20, 1999 at 01:34:32:
i love your work! this piece is amazing. i feel that it draws some parallels with my work.
i love the way you use color to convey thoughts and emotions, because i can see what you are trying to say. ('silver lakes of dawn' is a great line, as is 'scattering pieces of me in the wind')
one thing though, 'lost all together' is a bit of a cliche, so maybe find a different way of saying that (like lost in a labyrinth without a map, or something...)
other than that, it was wonderful. i love reading great poems at 2:11 am on a friday night.
jessika k
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