Spyder's Poetry Empire - Forum

In Reply to: When My Eyes Are Closed In Death posted by Gunslinger

I enjoy this. It flows perfectly, yes, the form is flawless from what I can tell, but the main attraction is the theme. Lately cynicism seems to over shadow the persual of a dream, and denounce dreaming itself as something worthless, and denounce love as a myth. None of it is true though...and its nice to see someone who believes in dreams and in love. However, it's sad that these things torment you the way they do. Regardless of all that, this is a very good poem.