Spyder's Poetry Empire - Forum

In Reply to: Hearts Do Mend posted by Sara J. Crago

i tell you what:
great content and purpose
in my opinion though, too much repetition with the "night" and "tight", okay?
one other thing:
if you're going to have a poem that follows some sort of meter,rhyme scheme,etc,make sure that the entire poem follows suit, or is at least somewhat symmetrical, especially with the emotional content you're trying to convey in this paticular piece. good shit though